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I dont know what's wrong with deviantart, but for some reason, he doesnt want to post the chapter.
So here's the link to fanfiction.net: [link]


YES, there will be a lemon in this fiction. Not yet though. And we’ll warn when it comes, so if you don’t want to read it, you don’t have to. But yes there will be a lemon.

Characters © Masashi Kishimoto
Jade + Kyra © ~Caylislover and ~Itachi4Raven
Story © ~Caylislover and ~Itachi4Raven

Chapters:
First: [link]
Back: [link]
Next: [link] { M rated! }
Last: { Story not Finished }

Related Pictures:
Deidara - [link]
Sakura Kimono Design - [link]
DeixSaku Golden Locket - [link]
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:iconsakura-uchiha1:
sakura-uchiha1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Artist
that ... was ... so ... intense ...I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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animejonin Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010
youre story is cool.
im a goth too XD
but i still cant read the 7 story..
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:iconnewluvz:
newluvz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2008
'She thinks Tobi is a good boy' Tobi thought hehe
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:iconnewluvz:
newluvz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2008
'She thinks Tobi is a good boy' Tobi thought hehe
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:iconkagome4life:
kagome4life Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2007   Writer
yeah it let me read it!
and.......
i love sasu saku but this is your story so do as you wish but i wish this would turn into a sasusaku story..oh wellz.
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
It wont be SasuSaku... Sorry.
But I can write some SasuSaku for you once, if you want?
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:iconkagome4life:
kagome4life Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007   Writer
yea ok and i know ive dpone read all the chappies that are out but i like this couple 2
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
Yeah :D
By the way, I really love your signature. It's just so dang true.
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:iconkagome4life:
kagome4life Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007   Writer
yea thanks
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
welcome ^^~:heart:
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:iconkagome4life:
kagome4life Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007   Writer
:D
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:iconkagome4life:
kagome4life Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2007   Writer
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAMN IT!!!!!
IT WONT LET ME GO TO THE PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!
HELP PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondarkey86:
darkey86 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007
omg,i loved this chapter ^__^
haha,nice that Sasuke and teh others of Akatsuki came too :D
really liked Hidan ;)
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007
^_^ Hidan is just.. the smexx. After Deidara. XD
Thanks <3
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:iconsakura1111:
sakura1111 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2007   Photographer
soo long but soo good/ i wuz about to ask where sasuke wuz in the story or if he wuz in the story but pop!
is choji gunna be in the story????
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007
Chouji? I wasnt planning too, but I can put him in if you want...
Thanks for all the faves btw :D
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:iconsakura1111:
sakura1111 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007   Photographer
np and coolz he could break into the akasuki(or dei's house lolz) and steel all the food lolz XD
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:iconmiroku-kun:
miroku-kun Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2007
i love it! and just when i was thinking "hm i wonder where sasuke is during all this....or if he's in this fic at all?" - he shows up - weird, ne?
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007
Lol. Whoa, strange. Ahh well, at least he's here now. ;P
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:iconmomomodified:
MomoModified Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
I'm dum, what do you mean,"lemon"?!
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007
You're not dumb if you dont know what a lemon is. A lemon is sex.
I had to figure that out as well when I got on fanfiction.net... xD
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MomoModified Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2007
Oh, thx! Now I fill much better!
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:iconionegirl:
ionegirl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
That's it!! I can't take it any more!! THERE SHALL BE fanart to this story! It is beyond awesomeness! It is now..... SWEETSOMENESS! :evillaugh:


I love this story, read it last night, woke up this morning going "GAH! I want more!"

"bounces" So when's the next chapter? "giggles!"


You two have an excellent story line, not to mention if Deidara and Sakura were placed in the real world, they would more than likely act like this! You have every character down, so i congratulate you both! Be expecting fanart flowing toward you! CUZ there will be a whole lot, i'm pretty darn sure!
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
:D That's like... our dream coming true. FANART. Oh hell yes. ~:heart:

Be sure that we adore you more then you adore the story. THANK YOU SO MUCH. Dont forget to send me a link of it when it's done! ;P
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:iconionegirl:
ionegirl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
"cheesy grin" No prob! Will do!
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:iconavi9119:
avi9119 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
I hope the next chapter will come soon!And i have to say your so talanted,i've loked at your :gallery: and your stories are so awsome!!!!
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
:D Thank you so much!!!!
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:iconagaat:
agaat Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
f'in cute! biiiig trouble awaits our pink-haired leadin' lady.
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2007
ahh, it sure does.
Thanks for reading. :)
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:iconcooliow77:
cooliow77 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
Oh, write the next soon, and Deidaku is like ADDICTING! >.< I'm like in love with all your stories, by the way. xD
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
Thank you so much! ^_^ I'm working on the next chappie right now!
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:iconcooliow77:
cooliow77 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
Oki, is there a nickname I can call you by?
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2007
Me?
Uhh. Well. Um.
You can call me whatever you want. ^^; Kelly, Caylis, Pie-chan, 'fatass', just what you like.
Although I wouldnt really like it if you'd call me fatass. xD
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:iconcooliow77:
cooliow77 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2007
xD I'm call you Caylic-nee-chan! Yes, nee-chan. I don't know why but I want to call you that. ^^;
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2007
Lol, do as you wish. ^_^ Yay! Nee-chan!
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:iconcooliow77:
cooliow77 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2007
Oi, Caylis-nee-chan, you can call me Chrissy, Christina, or Stina. Anything really works for me, just to let you know. I also go by Sakura. o.o;
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2007
Lol, I just hope I can remember *empty minded* Is Chrissy good then?

~Oh, I'm always sending short replies, aint I? ^^; Stupid fanfictions. I'm working in my vacation!! lol
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:iconunchosenone:
UnchosenOne Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
FUCK YAY!
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2007
XD
Thank you? xD
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:iconunchosenone:
UnchosenOne Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
FUCK YAY!
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:icondreaminglove:
dreaminglove Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay :dance: another chap!
deidara is soooo sweet! (at least in this story;P)
really weird to hear sakura say sasuke-san instead of her usual sasuke-kun
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
Hehe, glad you liked it <3
Aww, Deidara is always sweet! ... If you ignore the fact he kills people and sometimes acts like a total bastard and--.. I'll just shut up now. XD
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ninjadragon445445 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
LOL Tobi is a good boyXD lol, keep up the good work^.^
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007
Thanks, we will! ^^
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ninjadragon445445 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconkiarauchiha:
kiaraUchiha Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
ohh i love chappy 7 more plzzzzzzzzz :love:
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
= D Thanks <3
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:iconcutecartoon:
cutecartoon Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2007
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (worth the wait)

hidan: unsexy thoughts unsexy thoughts unsexy thoughts!..........damn!
HAHAHAHAHAHA that part was uber funfun!

and itachi's BLIND! hehe, srry but i always find a blind itachi amuzing. >.>
poor dei, he's so sad :hug:

next chapter is so going to be great (i know this because i'm PUH-sycic. XD) can't wait till then!
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:iconcaylislover:
Caylislover Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
Thanks!! =D
I love a blind Itachi too. Reminds me so much of "Fun With Akatsuki". Damn, the part where he steps on Hidan's face... xD
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cutecartoon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
YES!!! BLIND ITACHI LOVERS UNITE!!!!!!
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